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Winter's Lunar Sonnet

ok, i wrote this to make my friend fall asleep, because he couldn't. its kinda choppy, i must admit, but i like it. and the ending is kind of abrupt, but whateva... and the title is credited to Thugnastay227, thanks dude! hope you all enjoy :)
Creative Created on 12-26-08 Views(133) Story Rating G

The night was dark and cold, with snowflakes slowly drifting down to the earth's surface like feathers falling through the air. The moon was high above the trees, shining its radiance for the world to see. Tiny glistening stars twinkled in the darkness through small patches in the thick gray-white clouds....

A gentle pitter patter of running paws emerged from the calm forest, breaking the near silence. Darting out of the trees and into a clearing was a shadowy figure, stopping in the center to sniff the air. As it pointed its head up, the figure opened its mouth to pour out a beautiful song, a howl, which echoed through the woods. It unexpectedly stopped to sit down and wait...

Slowly, coming from the circle of trees, more shadowy figures appeared, forming a circle around the one figure in the center. Together, each figure thrust their heads into the air as they all let out a melody of howls, sounding almost like an orchestra of beautiful music....

As each howl continuously rang through the forest, the moon seemed to shine brighter than before. However, as the moon shown brighter, the gray-white clouds grew thicker, covering the moon as the gentle snowflakes came down harder than before. A furious wind soon picked up, as the tone of the melody grew stronger.....

Suddenly, the wind overpowered the shadow creatures' song, as the snow seemed to pound down in a raging manner. Nothing was in view, other than obscured visions of the forest through the fuming blizzard, as the song faded away into nothingness....

While the blizzard raged on, the shadow figures slowly disappeared through the nebulous clearing, fading away into the shadows of the trees, invisible through the blustering snow storm….

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On March 28th 2009 huronpliskin Said: 
huronpliskin this is beautiful
On February 25th 2009 TheWiraffe Said: 
TheWiraffe I loved it
On January 23rd 2009 nockets Said: 
nockets this inspires me to write...which is something i haven't done in a while. i can picture everything from this so vivdly and there's that looming sense of mysteriousness there too :-D
On December 30th 2008 animallover925 Said: 
animallover925 WOW U ARE SUCH A GOOD WRITER!!!
On December 26th 2008 Thugnastay227 Said: 
Thugnastay227
not too choppy the style is different. i like how it is written. and i like it cause it leaves plenty to imagination. like the reader is allowed to draw whatever conclsion they want. good job.