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His dream girl (Intro)

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Romance Created on 9-26-09 Views(655) Story Rating PG13

                        His dream girl (intro)

　

There are many situations that are hard in life as a teen: Fitting in, befriending the right crowd and never revealing your true self or true feelings. This is a story of a not so popular girl (Cassie) who is completely in love with her best friend Justin. Although she has been friends with Justin for ten years she has loved him for five out of ten of those years and no matter what she does the feelings won’t go away. Cassie comes up with a brilliant Idea that would hopefully get Justin to fall in love with her (To become his dream girl) to be beautiful, smart, sexy, funny and popular, but Cassie’s plan backfires when a new girl (Samantha) enrolls in their high school and she is the real girl of Justin’s dreams. So in order for Cassie not to embarrass herself and look like a total idiot she pretends that she’s okay with Justin dating Samantha, but knowing and wishing deep down inside that it was her instead. Due to Cassie’s change she’s stuck in the cruel society- high school world at "East Glenn High school" and can’t find her way back to the person she used too be. Not only that, but with each growing day she's drifting further away from Justin and he’s falling more and more in love with Samantha.

              This is the story (His dream girl)

Characters                                              Colors

Cassie: 18, 5"5 Green eyes and 130 lbs Lime green

Justin: 18, 6"0 blues eye and 150 lbs Red

Christine: 15, 5"1, Greenish-grey eyes and 120 lbs Green

Delilah: 18, 5"5, 125 lbs Pink

Samantha: 18, 5"7, Grey eyes and 140 lbs Light orange

Cassie’s mom: 46, 5"9 Grey eyes, and 160 lbs Deep blue

Cassie’s Dad: 48, 6"3, Green eyes and 210 lbs Brown

Michael: 18, 6"1, grey eyes and 165 lbs Purple

Hayden: 17, 5"4, Brown eyes and 135 lbs Sky blue

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Authors note: This story is somewhat like the story that I wrote and you loved "geeks can be beautiful", but I promise that the character you fall in love with this time won't die!!! However its different somehow. I think that you will love it its filled with romance and drama. I know that you'll love it. So let me know what you guys think.

Don't be shy let your opinions be known.

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On November 3rd 2009 sharonnjanae1 Said: 
sharonnjanae1 awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww how sweet u should be an author
On October 11th 2009 beccalynn4eve Said: 
beccalynn4eve My stories are all usually close to the same and this sounds interesting
On October 10th 2009 90999 Said: 
90999 sounds good to me :)
On October 3rd 2009 ashmac1996 Said: 
ashmac1996 holy god! It's awsome!
On September 30th 2009 singergrl24 Said: 
singergrl24 sounds really good
On September 30th 2009 celticunit Said: 
celticunit hmm....sounds intriguing. only by reading more of it will i be able to form a better or worse opinion about the story.
On September 27th 2009 Thelittleninja Said: 
Thelittleninja good story line!
On September 27th 2009 CHIOKOxx Said: 
CHIOKOxx cool
On September 27th 2009 kimbriel69 Said: 
kimbriel69 Loving the intro so far...
On September 27th 2009 mint101 Said: 
mint101 sounds good...
On September 26th 2009 gaia17 Said: 
gaia17 sounds interesting
On September 26th 2009 XBrokenMagicX Said: 
XBrokenMagicX good so far =]
On September 26th 2009 gothlvr98 Said: 
gothlvr98 It sounds interesting so far, just be sure not to become lost in the crowd. Keep it your own and don't let drama run the story. Make it unique and keep it interestingly BELIEVABLE!
On September 26th 2009 XFatalRebeccaX Said: 
XFatalRebeccaX Brap brap.. can't wait for more ! xD
On September 26th 2009 lovecookies14 Said: 
lovecookies14 i like it keep wrighting.
On September 26th 2009 Remari Said: 
Remari CCOOOOOOOLLLL!!!!!!!!!
On September 26th 2009 xX8Kikki8Xx Said: 
xX8Kikki8Xx Very interesting, but always have something out there that says it's you as the writer. There are plenty of love stories out there but you need to make your's your own. I suggest not too much drama but great detailing within scenery and thoughts of the characters will keep reader's interested. Keep up with your writing as a passion and read as well. Reading helps a lot with bringing out creativity based on skills of other writers. =]
On September 26th 2009 freakincool2 Said: 
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That's pretty sweet! Keep it up.
On September 26th 2009 nekoneko11 Said: 
nekoneko11 cant wait to read more :D
On September 26th 2009 kbre16 Said: 
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this sounds good so far...kmp plz
On September 26th 2009 UPTmrscarter93 Said: 
UPTmrscarter93 i like it so far
On September 26th 2009 ZanyZanna Said: 
ZanyZanna sounds good :D
On September 26th 2009 shadowkiss675 Said: 
shadowkiss675 its so good you should write it cant wait 2 read it
On September 26th 2009 BrittanyMca Said: 
BrittanyMca i like it thats the kind of storys that grabs my attention
On September 26th 2009 daniibaby22 Said: 
daniibaby22 i love it post soon cnt wait