My Stories
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Falling In Love Twice {Part 1}
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I awoke due to my cell phone ringing next to me. I reached over to the chest beside me and grabbed my cell phone and answered it. “Hello” I said “What’s up Angelica?” said my boyfriend Fred “Nothing, You just awoke me from a goodnight sleep” I said amusingly “Well I’m sorry but can you meet me a Central City Park in 30 minutes? I have some really bad news and I think I should tell you in person.” Fred said quietly “Okay, I hope its not that bad but I’ll be there” I said curiously I hung up the phone and started to get ready to meet Fred. When I finished getting dressed I ran down stairs and told my mom that I’ll be back in 10 minutes. I ran quickly out the front door hoping I wouldn’t be late. I jumped on my bike and headed to the park. When I arrived there I saw Fred standing there with a sad look on his face. So I got off my bike and walk over to him slowly. “Hey” I said in a low tone “Hey baby” Fred replied in a low tone also “What did you have to tell me?” I said dying to know what it was “I’m moving to California with my dad in three days and I wanted to know can we still make this relationship work even though it’s long distance?” Fred said with his eyes tearing up “umm I guess so” I replied with a tear rolling down my face “Good but I have to go now I’ll call you later” Fred said walking away slowly “Ok” I got on my bike and headed home during that time I busted into tears. In my mind I didn’t know if I would ever see the love of my life again of either live without him. Authors Note: I hope yall liked the first part.Please rate/comment so I can know if I need to keep going or not.Thank yall for taking the time to read it...Thanx :)
Comments
| On November 9th 2008 DayDream21 Said: |
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| i love it. dat same thing happend to me. |
| On September 7th 2008 lilprincess122 Said: |
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| On July 31st 2008 toni2006 Said: |
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| On July 31st 2008 reiningchic Said: |
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| Don't say things like "umm I guess so" that just ruins it.
You need to go into detail and make it more interesting.
For now, i'm not going to subscribe. I'm dissapointed. |
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| On July 31st 2008 Crosspiano Said: |
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