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He protested "You can't just get up and leave you have to rest"
"thank you for caring but I will be fine."
"ok but can I..."
My cell phone started ringing "Hello?"
"where are you girl we were going to the mall remember at 2"
It was Hayley,I slaped my forehead " No sorry I forgot and..."
" i better go see you later" it was Steven.
"no wait 1 min i'll hang-up."
"who's that?!?" thats my Hayley for you she's always in other peoples lives.
"Just a friend, I will met tomarrow at 3:30PM sharp but i just can't make it today, sorry."
"ok" i could hear she was sad, "See you tomarrow."
"bye and I really im sorry." and with that she hung up. I turned to finish what I was saying,and are eyes met I I could see he was sad too.
"whats wrong?"
"Just friends?"
"well...um...than what are we?"
"well...um...be my girlfriend?
What!! Steven Ryan's was asking me to be his girlfriend!?
"Yes!" And with that his kissed me
"I would hug you but...your ribs."
"its ok thanks." then his cell phone with Crank That by Soldja Boy
"hold on 1 sec ok Heather?"
"yeah go ahead"
"hello?" there was a pause for a min and said "ok I'll be right there....i'm on my way" and hung-up. "I'm really sorry but I have to go"
"ok i'll call you later then?"
"ok ,...you could come with be if you want too."
"It's ok I think i'm going to take a nap."
"ok, thank you." he kissed me one more time and was going to leave when we heared my mom leave her room.
"o no! you cant go down there she'll see you! um.... what are we going to do um....got it! go out my window there's a fire latter you can go dwon that"
"ok call me in a couple hours ok?"
"ok but go now before she comes up" and then he left. I layed on my bed I thought about the day. "how did I go from a no one, to Steven Ryan's girlfrend."
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| On March 21st 2008 stubishead Said : | |
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you're still rushing. calm it down. take notice of your spelling and grammar. |
| On February 17th 2008 nickjonson Said : | |
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The story is good, but the voice is too young and simple. No offense meant, but I would love to continue reading on, but (again, no offense) the text just doesn't keep me locked in. Let me know when you put more stuff though, I'm interested in seeing how you will progress. |
| On February 16th 2008 lillex64 Said : | |
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wow thts so cute! |
| On December 26th 2007 kg108551 Said : | |
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Loves it! |
| On December 24th 2007 piratesrule78 Said : | |
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yay im the 1st to comment i loved it keep me posted |


