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Romance Created on 1-8-08 Views(119) Story Rating G

                                      Steven's Point Of view

I had just got home and was in my room when my cell rang it said 425-786-8768 humm.......O!

"Hey" All I hread where sobs ans shriks kindof like a girl with a emoinal breakdow. What was wrong? "Sweetheart calm down and say that again."

"I need you *sobs* here*sobs*pleases!"

"Whats wronge?"

"When you left *sobs* i went inside*sobs*"

"and what happend?" I bet he beat her.

"*sobs* my house was fallen apart*sobs*my dad wasn't home*sobs*ans so I went into their room *sobs* and  my mom*sobs*she was ...she was dead!" O god this wasn't good at all.

"I will be right there ok?"

"ok bye."

"bye" I ran all the way there. When I got there there was police cars and medic cars. I ran in the open door to dee her facing away from me talking to a police officer. I walked up and slid my hands around her waist. I could feel her grow stiff, she turned around to see me her Knight in shining armer. I wish. the police officer said he could wait and left.I gave her a light kiss on her warm and soft lips.

"Steve your here."

"hey" I said in a almost wisper."are you alright?"she had stoped sobing but you could tell she was sad with her red puffy eyes and dryed up tears.

"no not really." I ran my fingers through her short beautiful wavy brown hair. and gave her a big hug,she smelled good for have been crying. What I said next was really hard to get across with not sounding rude.

"I know you don't want to be thinking of this but do you have family you can live with?" I already knew the answer"because if your dad comes back he will..."

" I know,I will have to go live with my uncle Rick in.....Maine."she looked really sad. but that didn't stop me from saying

"Maine!!" o my god that is so far away. the look on her face told me she cold read my mind.

"I know it's far but....untill my brother can come home..."

"brother you never said anything about a brother."

"I know,...he's in the war right now

"o i see." I felt like my heart was going break, Maine! but I had to be strong...for her sake. "but you are going to sleep with me....I mean at my house, right?"o god I can not belive I just said that. She laughed and moved her bangs out of her eyes.

"yes I will sleep at your house."

"lets get out of ok?" A smile poured over her face.

"lets go!"

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                   Heather's point of view

When we got to his house his mom was at the front door ready with cocoa is both hands, Whay a sweet lady.

"here you go you two," she turned handed the cocoa to Steven then turned to be and gave me a hug.i am so sorry sweetheart."

"thank you." we took the cocoa and went up to his room and drank the cocoa and tryed to work on are project.

"so where are you going to live?" I asked.

"how about Maine!"he snaped.

"i can't belive you I dont want to live there ant more then you want be to leave.but what else am I going to live!"

"im sorry I said that but do know how far Maine is from Washington!??"

"It's only for a little bit untill my brother can come home to look after me or untill my dad is caught ok?"I started to tear up.

"don't cry I am sorry for what I said." He gave me one of thouse hugs that make me weak at my knees "I....I love you."What he loved me! I looked up at him and I could see he ment it but I don't think i'm ready for him to love me, when im moving like 3,000 miles away.but i....

"I just said I love you can you say somthing??"

"I...I love you too." saying that felt happy and good. He kissed me he warm yet rigded lips agenst mine felt good. We layed on top of his bed just him holding amd me loving him. And thats when I fell asleep.... 

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On May 10th 2008 imtheonlyme4 Said :
imtheonlyme4 ahhh i love this story it feels so real my eyes started to water!!!!!!!!!
On February 16th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 wow!!! soo sad!!!
On February 3rd 2008 masielynn1991 Said :
masielynn1991 i will send several comments... i absolutely love this story... keep up the good work...
On February 1st 2008 PopChile Said :
PopChile come on people i need way more votes in the whole story to write more ok?
On January 8th 2008 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 OMG! Woah! You gotta keep me posted! I wanna know what happens next! :P