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Romance Created on 2-16-08 Views(119) Story Rating G

  I looked over at Stevn and he saw what I did, my dad was crossing the street, he hadn't seen us yet, but made me really mad was he was walking around like nothing was wrong, like he hadn't done anything. My eyes started to water, and I felt hot. Steven grabed my hand and we ran down a ally,across a yard, in to a libary and down the stairs. Then I broke down, and just cried all over again, Steven held me and told me everthing was going to be alright.

"sssshhhh.....it's ok, he not going to find us, he didn't even see us," I didn't stop at all if anything I was crying harder,"look at me Heather." I sniff a little, blew my nose looked up at him, his deep bright blue eyes,

 "I love you so much."

"I'm....afride to....." I trailed off wanting to forget what I just thought

"what?"

"nothing forget it."

"no tell me."

"I'm almost afride to...."

"to what, I don't care how stupid it sounds tell me."

"afride to...love you." He looked hurt, I could see it in his eyes.

"....why....you said it before,...I thought you ment it."

" I did...but after i saw my dad, I relized everyone I have ever loved have died, my mother, my first aunt, my ittle sister, everyone.

"I had no idea." the thought of that made me just hug him, and he just held me, in the bottom of the libary.

 

 [What do you think? please  comment and vote, I will try vary hard to write more on either sunday or monday, it is hard to write with 6 other kids need the PC and we only have 1 so yeah.....]

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On February 18th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 awsome I loved it. keep up the good work. Oh and btw I am so sorry but Im in love with my best friend might not be posted this week. well kmp
On February 16th 2008 tarahleigh Said :
tarahleigh i liked this well written
On February 16th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 i love this story!