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Romance Created on 2-27-08 Views(101) Story Rating G

                Author's note: this is going to a short one I am sorry but thats the way it has to be.

                                  Steven point of view

         After about ten min. of her crying, I really thought the basement was going to flood, after a couple more min. later she stopped some, and we  left the libary, and walk over to her house, witch took us about five min. on the way we tryed to talk, but the quietness killed me before her,

"Hey, what are you thinking about?"  It took a min. before she responded

" I'm scared to go go over there,....whats if he's,........there, what if we get hurt, or......" I cut her off, and pulled her arm to stop her, pulled her into me so her arms where around my neck, i kissed her,

"nothing is to hurt you I promise  you that, besides I love you too much to let anything happen to you, do you hear be." she kissed me back, god it felt so good kissing her,better than anyone I have ever kissed,when she kissed me, something, I don't know something just felt right.

"yes Steve I know you love me,"  She leaned close to me and whispered in my ear" I love you too." That felt even better than life it's self, hearing that. We continued to walk to her house,but when you got there, someone was inside, we could see thats from out side, who was it?

 

[who is it? is it, A) her dad, B) A police man C) A homeless person, or D) her.....mom's ghost? stay tuned  part 13 will be out as soon as I can. Vote and comment]    

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On March 17th 2008 flawlesslove13 Said :
flawlesslove13 I LiKE IT! KMP!
On March 15th 2008 killerXmacky13 Said :
killerXmacky13 I like it!! a lot. :] KMP
On March 8th 2008 xXEmoxGirlx3Xx Said :
xXEmoxGirlx3Xx OMG! I frwak love it! KMP!
On February 28th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 oooooooo I think its her dad. I wonder who it is kmp plz
On February 27th 2008 lillex64 Said :
lillex64 I bet Tht its either her dad or a police officer tht startles them
On February 27th 2008 tumblegrl1994 Said :
tumblegrl1994 idk good question... lol please KMP :)