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ONE WISH [PART 5] |
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We belong together 1Title is not definite yet. Rate/Comment ...
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Chapter 1 -
I don’t know which was worse - the day my father's business collapsed or when he told us that we were moving. My dad had been given a great business offer which he couldn’t turn down. Unfortunately, we had to move from our comfortable small town to the big city. Which I guess would be a thrill for most teenage girls, but not me...
Here I stand, tears trickling down my cheeks. Closing my eyes in pain with images flickering inside my head - the first time I met Chad - our first kiss, touch and the first time we made love. It is almost impossible for me to control my breathing, the pain is too much - unbearable and it feels like I'm dying. I rested my right hand on my heart trying to control my breathing, but it was to hard and painful. My heart was slowly tearing apart.
Chad stroked my cheek, gazed into my brown eyes and gave me a soft sensual kiss.
'' It will be OK '' he whispered '' I will love you, forever... ''
I wrapped my arms around his neck, hugging him tightly.
'' I don’t want to let you go '' I whispered back.
'' Me neither '' he replied, stroking my brown long hair.
I glanced over my shoulder; my dad was impatiently waiting in the car. The car was loaded with packing’s, we were all set and ready to go , the only thing holding us back was me.
'' I'm scared '' I whispered, my voice shaking.
A gentle smiled spread across his face '' Don’t be '' he encouraged. '' I will wait you. And nothing will tear us apart''
He took my hand and held it tightly, gazing into my eyes. Making me feel all warm inside. Just like the first time we kissed. Oh Chad, this cant possibly be happening to us ..
I glanced over my shoulder once again, and I noticed that my father was glaring at me.
I looked at Chad, I guess he noticed that time was running out because he bent down and passionately kissed me.
'' Goodbye, my love''
I nodded in pain '' I love you .. ''
'' Your everything to me'' he replied .
I tried holding my tears back and tried to smile, but it was almost impossible.
I realized it was time to let go, I slowly walked to the car. Every step I took further from Chad tormented my soul.
I stood by the door for a minute , trying to relax and breathe. I took a deep breathe and opened the car door. I leaned my head on the car seat and tears were trickling down my cheeks.
'' You alright, darling’? My father asked, worried.
I nodded, I couldn’t speak - the pain.. is too much.
My father turned the key and the car started. Right then, at that moment my heart shattered to pieces.
I looked out the car window and saw Chad wave goodbye, I bit my lip, trying to control
the heartache. I had found the true love of my life, only to be separated from him.
Comments
| On July 31st 2009 DarthRavus Said: |
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| I know what thats like...only it was a girl...cuz im kind of a guy...lolz. |
| On July 2nd 2009 XSweetDreamzX Said: |
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| Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwww =( |
| On May 16th 2009 HottWriter01 Said: |
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| Your writing has improved! I didn't even think that was possible! ***** [[five stars]] :] |
| On May 12th 2009 Fairiesrule112 Said: |
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| omg :( noooo sad!!! |
| On April 20th 2009 Teliana15 Said: |
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| Ahh so sad... |
| On April 18th 2009 What123654 Said: |
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| :))))) its so sad |
| On April 18th 2009 bigsoftheart Said: |
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| ;..... ( keep going... |
| On April 17th 2009 melinda105 Said: |
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| wowwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww |
| On April 16th 2009 yourmamano2 Said: |
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| you should deff. keep writing, ill be waiting :) |
| On April 14th 2009 shadow4tonight Said: |
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| Sounds really good |
| On April 13th 2009 MCRsLover Said: |
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| aww,this is so sad! i cant wait for more! kmp, darling! |
| On April 13th 2009 toni2006 Said: |
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| awww this was sad but i love it its an amazing start can't wait to see where this story goes i'm subscribing |
| On April 13th 2009 BeagleGurl9 Said: |
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| Aww! Very cute story!!! Thank you for posting it on my page!!! |
| On April 13th 2009 deshanna13 Said: |
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| I wonder what's going to happen though...KMP! |
| On April 13th 2009 ShortiieGurl Said: |
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| I have a great idea for this story.. ! |
| On April 13th 2009 angel0428 Said: |
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| its okay... you always have phone and internet... Once you are 18 you can move... smile! |
| On April 13th 2009 RockAngelGirl Said: |
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| omg this is sad! kmp plz =) |
| On April 13th 2009 makemebreakme5 Said: |
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| awwwww man i think i actually cried! |
| On April 12th 2009 rawr1994 Said: |
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| aw! thats so sad :( |
| On April 12th 2009 xxxshylaxxx Said: |
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| omf! i agree with bowzlady1! this is amazing! please kmp |
| On April 12th 2009 bowzlady1 Said: |
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| omg! that's so sad. I'd die! |
| On April 12th 2009 sk8haileyg Said: |
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| awwee, this is reaaally good. :) |
| On April 12th 2009 mrsdh Said: |
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| awwwwwwwwwwwwwswswwwwwwwwwww how freakin sad, dang, why her daddy do that 2 her |
| On April 12th 2009 jessi9509runit Said: |
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| Aww omg that was so sad!!! |
| On April 12th 2009 angeesseule Said: |
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| OMG It's amazing, wow you really have some real bas ass talent there.
I'm subscribing :D i'll be anticipating part 2. XD wow i felt her pain...THE last line was priceless!! |


