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Unexpected Visitor.

Romance Created on 4-30-08 Views(649) Story Rating G

     She hears a sudden knock at the door. She opens it and is suddenly jumped and pressed against the wall. Him. The one she secretly desired for some time. He presses His lips against hers. Kissing with such passion. Taking her breath away. She moans suddenly in pleasure and disbelief that he was actually there. His leg kicks out at the door to close it.

     While she is being kissed he shreds her clothes off like a monster. A subtle purring growl is heard from him. She reciprocates with a playful rawr. He kisses every inch of her flesh that appears as he rips off the fabrics. Lifting her up and heading to her bed.

     They fall to the bed with her straddling him as he rapidly takes off his top. She reaches behind herself to grab him through his pants feeling him grow in her firm grasp. Caressing his shaft through through the denim. She likes doing that. It's a tease for him. He doesn't like to be teased. However she manages it make it most enjoyable. He leans up to her and sucks on her collarbone. He then proceeds to help take off her torn top. They embrace one another. Kisses are succeeded by more kisses.

     With a ballerina's grace she jumps up and yanks his pants off. He springs up and her eyes widen. Without warning he is pounced upon. Akin to a lioness in the Serengeti stalking a water buffalo. Once more she reaches behind him and jerks even more and plays with his sack and shaft. Attacking it in such a delightful pain. Without missing a beat they continue to kiss one another, the lips are as if they are cemented together. During the kiss she correctly aims without looking. Forcing his member into her. Aggressively being pushed beyond the perfectly shaven labial gates. Gates that already show evidence of condensation. Gates that seem to eagerly envelope its new thick-headed visitor.

     Both of their eyes were closed but both were suddenly forced open. Opened when she raised herself up after only letting in just a small portion. Then belligerently slamming herself onto him. His head squeezing into her narrow channel, immensely enjoying the throbbing, pulsing pressure placed on every square inch of it's surface. Almost as if in a life or death headlock. It makes his eyes virtually pop out.

     She takes full advantage of being on top. Bracing herself by pressing her hands firmly on his chest for leverage. Slamming like a titan onto his base. Wet, hard, and sloppy sounds surround us. She manages to make him groan in ways he's never had before. Slamming. Slamming. Hard, harder, and oh so harder as she looks down at him. Sinfully grinning the level of pleasure on his face. This turns her even more so. She rises up off of his chest

     She raises her arms so that her fingers mingle in her thick, light-auburn hair. She begins to rapidly grind back and forth on him. He manages to stay inside her, riding out the storm of passion. Forth and back his shaft is being slammed into her soaking wet walls. Fluids dripping down the shaft and pooling between his legs

     Taking one arm she leans back and grabs his ankle for more torque. Her grind intensifies and goes deeper while she plays with herself. Juices gush everywhere. Random sprits manage to land itself on his lips. He wastes no time in licking it off.

     Harder and Rougher She leans back on him increasing the angle and pressure on them both. She moans as he employs his freshly licked thumb to rub furiously on her clit. It is almost more than she can handle. Suddenly leaning over him, she grabs his arms and places them over his head and holds them there with hers. She's now grinding her clit on his pelvic area. Grinding hard as if to start a fire. Her hair draping down over their faces and they kiss like two ravenous beasts. They are both near their limits when he breaks free of her hold.

     Pulling her tight to him, he bites her neck and sucks on it at the same time. Holding her securely. She's now his helpless victim as he thrusts up into her with all the energy he has left. She moans out and uses words he's never heard used before in such a manner. This was a "knee-jerk" response to his attacking of both her neck and insides. "So wet!" He thinks. "So damn wet and tight!" This is a vicious onslaught in which both sides come out victorious.

     He is now feeling her convulse on him and get increasingly tighter. Her "peach" soft flesh still wrapped around every millimeter of him. Over stimulated he now is, as is she. They climax together and she gushes more than she has in quite a while and he has an explosive reaction as well. Convulsions easing, subsiding, returning to normalcy.

     Soon after the tryst, he pulls her to him and they lie side by side in a spooning position. He whispers sweet nothings in her ear, randomly nibbling. A nibble on her earlobe. A nibble on her neck. Talking of what they just shared. That mutual experience. She turns to him and lays him on his back again and crawls on top. In an almost fetal position kissing his chest that still glistens with the mixed sweat of the two. He runs his fingers through her hair, smiling as he visualized all of what happened. She tells him how secure and alive she feels just being in his proximity. He tells her that he shall forever keep her safe. She leans up a bit more and the two exchange a few more light pecks on each other's lips.

     There they lay there for what seems like hours and simmer in their symbiotic passion.

 

 

 

 

Douglas S. Williams

 

 

*Disclaimer* When I write in this manner, it is usually more romantic in detail. I was essentially challenged to write this way. Unsure how it sounds. The person liked it. What say you?

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On February 23rd 2009 mellymellyyay Said: 
mellymellyyay amazing. just simply amazing. best erotic on this site.
On October 22nd 2008 barbarian1 Said: 
barbarian1 the writeing was good but the subject mater wasn't what i read, i didn't read the hole thing
On August 19th 2008 bowzlady1 Said: 
bowzlady1 Again Loved iT! Im N2 The WHole Sex & romance thing, It keeps the story Interesting. Scale of 1-10? 20!
On August 19th 2008 ArtemisStar Said: 
ArtemisStar Wow. I love the last line in particular. x
On June 6th 2008 kissofasia Said: 
my picture
yay! this is so ummm so sexual and passionate,romantic all the things that love should be.I love it...
On May 25th 2008 moosegurl01 Said: 
moosegurl01 very nice story
On May 17th 2008 ausjo Said: 
ausjo How very steamy Sir Nastay. haha. ;)
On May 14th 2008 lisaljb Said: 
lisaljb Woah buddy, very passionate and sweet! :) I enjoyed reading this, really I did, I like how you used third person point of view, it made it very likable!! Pfft so I'm not an adult, I'm still a virgin and there are younger people then me that already lost it!! Lmao, I'm behind!! No worries though, I understood it all! Great job on writing this, and of course great word choice, you should be proud! :)
On May 5th 2008 mydragonlord Said: 
mydragonlord Mmmm now where is my Dragon Witch? LOVED this!!!
On May 3rd 2008 amptone Said: 
amptone OH, um.. how nice.. - fans self -
On May 2nd 2008 sochula777 Said: 
sochula777 Wow THAT'S HOT!!!!! I totaly loved it!
On May 2nd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: 
xHickChick789x Nicely written
On May 2nd 2008 crazpaige Said: 
crazpaige Nice description, I think there was loads of passion in this piece. Nice work
On May 1st 2008 noodles69soup Said: 
noodles69soup How it sounds familiar, but I do say I like it very much and enjoyed reading it again!! Still exciting I see!! :) :) :) :)
On May 1st 2008 joabizz Said: 
joabizz OH MORE PASSION???? I am a bit confused.. lol
On May 1st 2008 joabizz Said: 
joabizz hahaha!! Omg, what a read!!! I so did not expect this, but I loved it!! I really enjoy when I see writers step out of the box, I know that I have said this before but I truly mean it!!! SEX is great!!! right??? so why not write about it!! you did a fantastic job with having us readers get the visual..
On May 1st 2008 KaosQueen Said: 
KaosQueen
HAHA! im sure you were right when you said this wasnt for my eyes! LMFAOOOOOOO, but nicely written Prrimmooo xD hahahahahaha "giggles"

On May 1st 2008 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem Humm...I did like it but yes there did need to be more passion. I mean for heavens sake they were do it that long! There should be a little speech! LOL "wheres my asthma pump?" Thats a good comment!
On April 30th 2008 gonzo4201 Said: 
gonzo4201 this was very good, very descriptive, Loved it!!
On April 30th 2008 october1015 Said: 
october1015 I loved it as well...very passionate... ;)... Where's my asthma pump?
On April 30th 2008 morbidangel585 Said: 
morbidangel585 i must say, i like how you did this. i loved every second of this. its not what you normally write, but i loved it =]