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Life of Clarysa |
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Angels Fall Sometimes |
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Losing A Best Friend |
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Angels Fall Sometimes
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Introduction
"You are to serve your time on earth. You will have one week to correct your mistakes. Feel priveledged you get this second chance," He told her as He removed her wings. "If you shall fail to impress me with your efforts you will be sentenced to spend all etenity in the depths of hell. Do not disappointment," He said in a firm, but gentle voice. Reluctantly she accepted her fate. She looked down to embrace her future and as the clouds cleared from below her feet she began her fall...
Chapter 1
She lied motionless on the ground. The only movement she made was that of her breathing; the only way to tell she was still alive.
Her eyes were glued to the sky. What was she thinking? Who knew? Slowly, a young man approached her. "Ma'am, are you okay?"
She gave no response. He gave her arm a nudge, "Ma'am?" She did not speak. Who was this girl?
Realizing where she was after the young man began yelling for help, she grabbed his arm, "I'm alright," she finally said.
"Let me help you up. You took such a great fall. The walkways are always slippery this time of year. Where are you from? I'm Blake" he proceeded in a conversation. "It must appear as though I have slipped,"she thought to herself. He reached out his hand and helped her up as she replied, "Yes, I've noticed that it is slippery." Then she let out a giggle, making it apparent that she was embarrassed. "Oh, I'm from...I moved here from..(she finally came up with an answer) Los Angeles," she continued. "Wow, what are you doing here?" She looked up at the sky and replied, "God only knows." Again, looking at the young man she said, "Anyways, I need to get going. Thank you for everything." She shook his hand and began to walk away, not really knowing where she was going. Perhaps it was obvious because Blake asked her, "Would you like some company?" She stopped and thought for a minute then accepted his offer.
As they walked along, crossing the busy streets, he finally asked her, "So, you never told me your name or where we're heading?" She began to think..."Well my name is Cristasha and I honestly do not know where I'm heading," she finally answered him as she continued walking to where she wasn't sure. "Hmm, okay?" Blake didn't know exactly how to respond to her answer. "Well, Cristasha, are you sure you're okay? That was a pretty nasty fall earlier. Would you like to come by my place and rest maybe?" She stopped and looked at him. "I'm sorry if I gave you the wrong impression since you found me on the streets, but that doesn't give you the right for accusations!" He gave her a puzzled look, "What are you going on about?" She rolled her eyes then quickly replied, "I'm not going to have intercourse with you!" Blake began to laugh. "What is so funny?" Cristasha asked. "I don't even know you and you think I want to have sex with you?! I find that hilarious! Listen, babe you might be pretty and all but don't flatter yourself," Blake told her as he turned to walk away. "What's that suppose to mean?!" He turned around and said, "Well I was just trying to help so maybe you should lay off the accusations," then he continued on his way.
Rethinking the conversation and the fact that he just might have been honestly wanting to help her out she let out a sigh. "Well this probably isn't looking good so far," she thought to herself "but, I need to get busy. No time to waste worrying about that conceited guy!" she said trying to make herself feel better about what just happened. So, she continued on her unknown journey to better herself..but what was she suppose to do?
Comments
| On October 24th 2007 MelissaDA Said: |
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| this is very good. You should continue it. if you do let me know. |
| On July 25th 2007 silverjj Said: |
| On July 25th 2007 TaUroNui Said: |
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| this is very good u should continue it i wanna find out if she completes her task..whatever it is!! XD |
| On July 25th 2007 kartaylir5 Said: |
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| That's a good idea to write a story about! I like how you include humor into a serious situation. Write on! |


