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Hells Kitchen episode 1 part 3: Elimination

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After a terrible first night's service, most of the blue team were out in the patio lounge, smoking ciggs and having a drink.

Benitto, who has the daunting task to nominate two of his members, is having a lot of trouble.

To be honest, I don't know who I should put up there tonight. Toxin is a

given..he fucked up on fish..but after that it is a toss up.

Back into the patio, the guys are giving Toxin a hard time.

"What happened tonight man?" asked Ral to Toxin.  "You fucked up big dude."

Toxin just shrugged his shoulders, "I don't know..the fish was not cooking properly I guess."

I know I did bad tonight.. but Im not gunna go to Benitto and be him

to not nominate me.. Im nobody's bitch.

"Aaron, you fucked up on meant tonight," said Max pointing to Aaron.

"Yeah, but it was a couple of steaks..so what?" said Aaron defensively.

"So you fucked up, I think that you and Toxin did the worst." accused Max

Aaron says it was just a couple of steaks?  Those couple of steaks cost us and if

he did it right..then we might of been safe.

"Yeah well, whatever dude," said Aaron smoking.

Max thinks that he is all that and he thinks that he knows all.

All he has been doing is kissing Benitto's ass.

Back in the dorms, the girls are celebrating their first victory.

"Congrats girks, we beat the boys," said a cheery GreatRomancess slapping high fives with everyone.

"Yeah we rocked it outttt," said a happy CassieQ

Us girls strike first! That should show the guys that we are a

force to be reckoned with.

"Whoahhh..did you just see that duck run by?" said a very confused Dash.

Sunloverz rolls her eyes, "psychoooo," she said.

Moments later, the blue team files into the dining room as the red team watches on from a table.

Chef Ramsay comes down from his office and he faces the blue team.

"Benitto," said Chef Ramsay.

"Yes chef," replies Benitto.

"First nominee and why please," said Chef Ramsay crossing his arms.

"Chef, my first nominee is Toxin," said Benitto.

Toxin does a quck glance toward Benitto's direction.

"I chose toxin because he messed up on fish badly and he couldn't deliver." finishes Benitto.

"Second nominee and why please," asked Chef Ramsay.

"My second nominee is...Aaron chef..I chose Aaron because he didnt do that well on meat and he shows a lack of interest." replies Benitto.

"Thank you," said Chef Ramsay, "Toxin..Aaron..step forward."

Toxin and Aaron both stepped forward.

"Toxin..why should you stay in Hells Kitchen?" asked Chef Ramsay with a curious face.

"Well chef, I messed up on fish tonight..but it was just first night jitters..If I stay ill show you that i can improve," said Toxin.

"Aaron..why should you stay?" asked Chef Ramsay.

"Well I messed up on meat tonight, but Im a fast learner and im ready to improve and kick ass," said a confident Aaron.

"This is not an easy decision." said Chef Ramsay, "the person leaving hells kitchen is..Toxin..give me your jacket..your leaving hells kitchen." said Chef Ramsay.

Toxin unbuttons his jacket and hands it to Chef Ramsay and takes a long walk trough the back door of Hell's Kitchen.

I think it sucks that im the first one to get kicked out..but that is not going

to stop my dream to become a great chef.

"We will have to do better next ime.. I wanna see some improvement..now get some sleep..piss off." aanounced Chef Ramsay.

The aspiring chefs file out the kitchen.

(aaron) I was almost cut tonight..im not gonna let that happen again.

Sunloverz overvoice: It was tough but i think i got what it takes.

CassieQ's overvoice: This is no joke..it's just going to get harder.

Putsy's overvoice: My mate Aaron almost got kicked..max is going to pay

Chef Ramsay walks up the stairs to his office with toxin's jacket.

Chef's overvoice: To become an executive chef..you have to have passion, knowledge, heart.. Toxin had neither.

Chef Ramsay hooks toxin's jacked and toxin's picture burns.

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On June 16th 2009 sixtiespixie Said: 
sixtiespixie This is really interesting :)
On March 9th 2009 Benitto420 Said: 
Benitto420 Awesome yanks! Keep 'em coming man!
On March 8th 2009 Mich6el6M6nson Said: 
Mich6el6M6nson very good...
On March 6th 2009 DashboardLogic Said: 
DashboardLogic XD fuck a duck. wtf. wooooo!~ wth. o.O ... I'm sleepy.. and hungry... *walks away* Come on Steve.
On March 6th 2009 muse4apoem Said: 
muse4apoem I thought for sure Aaron was going to be eliminated!
On March 5th 2009 CassieQ16 Said: 
CassieQ16 haha = ] i love saying piss off lol
On March 5th 2009 Sunloverz Said: 
Sunloverz love it =) HAHA !
On March 5th 2009 scoobysnax4us2 Said: 
scoobysnax4us2 LOL putsy is gonna fuck u up max
On March 5th 2009 max5892 Said: 
max5892 im afraid of putsy...