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It's Different Now [8] The Finale |
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Finding my Miracle [5]
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"I told you. I got hit in the face with a football. Now I don’t appreciate you being this close to me. Would you please get off of me?" I asked, trembling from his closeness to me.
"Ariel. I have seen bruises like that before and it isn’t from a fucking football! Please tell me who did it?" He pleaded. I pushed him away from me but he didn’t move at all. I could feel the moisture in my eyes threaten to spill over and run down my hot cheeks. The bell rang, telling me that I was late for class. I tried once more to get free of his grip, but it was no use. "I can’t tell you. I barely even know you!" I screamed at him. He backed away from me with a hurt expression in his eyes. "You know what, fuck you. I don’t need this. I wanted to help but I guess you just want to be a dumbass and let this keep happening to you," he explained as he walked away and out of the building. I wiped the stray tears away from my face and walked to the office to get a tardy slip. The woman behind the desk looked at me questioningly as soon as I walked into the plain and boring office. "May I help you?" She asked me as she pulled out a tardy slip. "I had some menstrual problems but I am fine now. I need a slip to History please," I explained. She filled out the slip and handed it to me. I walked to my history class and got through the school day as fast as I could. ********************* The sunlight hurt my sensitive eyes as I walked out of the doors of the school. The cool breeze felt good on my hot body. I skipped down the long stairway and said goodbye to Riley, who had a worried look on her face, no doubt for my safety. I started walking slowly through the woodsy area leading to my own personal hell when I heard leaves crunching behind me. I turned around to find Shane standing in front of a tree, staring at me. "Did you come to yell at me some more or just pin me up against a tree?" I asked bitterly. "I am sorry about that, I just, I don’t like seeing you like this. Don’t ask me why, but I feel this weird protectiveness over you, like I have to protect you." He said with a small tear streaming from his eyes, only to be quickly wiped away. I stepped forward and sat down on a tree stump beside me. "If you tell me about how you got that bruise, I will tell you something no one else knows. Please tell me," He begged as he sat down in front of me. I told him about Joey. How he was a drunk and beat me all the time. He looked so angry, I thought he might punch a hole through a tree. "What’s your secret?" I asked, trying to change the subject. He looked at me and smiled. "I can see and hear things normal people can’t. I can see things that haven’t happened yet, and everything I see always comes true. I can hear things people aren’t saying aloud, but in their heads. I am weird, not normal. I knew everything you said without you even telling me. I saw the images of what happened as you told me," He whispered. I looked at him amazed. We sat in silence for a moment. "What else have you seen about me?" I asked curious. "I can’t tell you. It would freak you out, but trust me. It is good, and I will make sure it comes true," He said mysteriously. He took my hand and closed his eyes. He kept them sealed for a long moment until he leaned forward and kissed me sofly. Rate and comment!
Comments
| On December 28th 2008 What123654 Said: |
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| awesome |
| On December 22nd 2008 lateindigo Said: |
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| cool!
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| On December 6th 2008 bayleebroken Said: |
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| ah! awesome. |
| On December 3rd 2008 xHickChick789x Said: |
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| I agree with what everyone said below me. lol great job though Dani :D |
| On November 30th 2008 malaysianacces Said: |
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| oh wow, it is not so much like twilight people!!! twilight is completely different!!! yeah, twilight was great but this is a different kind of great!! sheesh!!! haha, kmp!! great chapter!!! |
| On November 30th 2008 monkey892 Said: |
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| There's one line that is like Twilight the movie but nothing else, god people! But great chapter Dani, Like always. |
| On November 30th 2008 funnystar Said: |
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| umm . well twilight has basically everything in it , so i doubt ANYONE will be able to write a story for a while now w/o everyone saying its like twilight .
but this story has too many twist x_x |
| On November 29th 2008 SummerxCyanide Said: |
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| o love it n its not like twilight fnish it!!!!!lol |
| On November 29th 2008 RaneDropss Said: |
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| Dude it's not like twilight unless he's a friggin vampire! and i'm sure the whole seeing the futre thing was used wayy before twilight. so yea ppk need to chill with that. |
| On November 29th 2008 jirrith2007 Said: |
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| I frickin hate how people are saying it's like Twilight... I swear, if someone tells me to read that book, I'll tear it up and burn it for good measure...
anyways, I love your story!! keep it up! |
| On November 29th 2008 KimSmallwood Said: |
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| ah! awesome...i want a hot psychic loverrrr! |
| On November 29th 2008 emmy4ya Said: |
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| lovee it!! |
| On November 29th 2008 Sexican24 Said: |
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| KMP
Keep me posted |
| On November 29th 2008 MissCheerCap Said: |
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| awwwwwww I love love the ending...it is a little like twilight with him seeing in the future...like the pixie chick!! haha |
| On November 29th 2008 toni2006 Said: |
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| awww i love it i like the twist you put in there about shane not being like everyone else can't wait for the next one |
| On November 29th 2008 xcarolinachaos Said: |
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| its like twilight a little |
| On November 29th 2008 kiss4nutn Said: |
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| YES i lOVE it lOVE it lOVE it |
| On November 29th 2008 momoleighann Said: |
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| omgosh i love this story, it is truly amazing |


