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The Savior |
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The Savior
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The sun warms my furrowed brow as I stumble from the sand,
Grabbing, clutching the waves pull me down,
I can not move,
My energy is lost.
What happened last night?
Who was I with?
Thunder cracks, I see the pain,
Blood trickles down my arm.
What happened last night echoes in my mind.
Who was I with?
A large wave comes crashing in smashing me to the ground,
I scream,
Pain throughout my whole body.
Help I try to scream but no sound abounds from my lips.
Pain. Pain.
I see him now, dark and brooding.
Sitting across the bar.
I turned away uneasy I was, angry he must have been,
At my side he was next saying do not scream,
Pain. Pain.
I try to move the pain worsens.
As we move towards the exit I remember him saying,
“Fear me not I am your savior.”
This scared me more.
Help please I scream internally.
The dark room was next, yes I see it now.
He throws me in on something soft…a bed? Yes
Please no I scream. Upon me he is I smell his stench.
Please help I need some help. I try to fight but his size is massive.
Leave me be I pray. He says I protect you . What is this maniac talking about I wonder.? Through the whole night time after time he devours my soul. Cold I am now. I feel nothing and crave everything. Freedom, I want to live. He tells me,” You will not die if you do not tell.” Then pain ensues……..then I wake up here…..I cry out in pain…please help me walk. That is all I want to do. Walk for help. My throat aches, my lips has blood on it, my face feels swollen, and everything else feels cold. Help me I want to scream but I can not. I find the strength to get far enough away from the ocean and I collapse.
I awake to the sounds of a siren and someone holding my hand. A man is speaking, his voice familiar, “ma’am do you remember what happened he asks? “ Who is this man? He says,” You are ok?” I raise me head to try to see his face. A hand touches my brow as I try to see. Oh no! my face freezes in terror……” Do not fear me my dear I will protect you!” he says. “Officer Barbari, hand me that syringe” the medic says. It is him, the officer, I try to scream but I can not I taste the blood now. It consumes my mouth. I try to scream I can not. I hear the medic say, “poor girl he cut her tongue out. This is the 3rd one this week. And he leaves a card at each one saying protector. She is lucky someone found her. The others were not so lucky.”
The man with his sinister smirk just leans down and whispers, “see I told you I was your savior”.
C.A.N.
Comments
| On December 7th 2007 CSLimeWriter Said: |
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| did something like that ever happen to you or did you just make it up? Wow that's so creepy! |
| On September 24th 2007 pru1989 Said: |
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| wow thats good |
| On August 16th 2007 jesusfreakaka Said: |
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| Creepy, but very interesting. You might want to consider checking the punctuation and grammer though....... |
| On August 6th 2007 Aaquaian Said: |
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| Interesting story, nice work |


