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Invisible Blood

Creative Created on 5-16-07 Views(412) Story Rating G

Looking at the floor, wanting it to be red. My hand begins to shke. Am I strong enough to face the devils judgement? Surely, I will go to hell for this sin. Wanting my world to be surrounded with my bllod. It boils deep down and I begin to scratch. I can hear the phone ring down the corridor, but I know its not for me, not anymore. How I miss the day when you loved me. But not anymore.

I know he laughs behind my back and never took my love seriously, show my scars and wounds, never did he cry. These tears are forever falling down my face and my skin becomes shredded beneath the blade. I cry, with joy. This invisible blood I've bled. Oh how I love it so. This light inside me, I would give anything to rip it out. Its your, your blood, your flesh, your baby. It grows deep down in side, but you never cared, you never showed the love I needed and for that action I am dieing. We are dieing. Will you help me now, will you call and will you cry? Will you kiss my wounds and mop up the invisible blood I've bled?

Yours eyes rape my body and your tongue peirces my skin. This demon lurching over my shoulder will not leave me alone, do you notice my pain? Do you see the numbers flowing around you head? You time will come, count down the clock, your time starts now. Look at my invisible blood, do you see it? Do you care for us. The life in your hands, you chocked it to death. I hope you suffer the consequences. Two tomb stones made in a night. Two bodies alone on the bathroom floor. My lovers spawn. Grew inside me like a creature from beyond. No you can lay it to rest.

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On May 17th 2007 Lillette087 Said: 
Lillette087 im 19 and pregnant and my baby's father doesnt love me anymore. I must admit i did feel this way before so I felt it hit me in my heart. I almost cried. Now I dont feel that way anymore and i love my baby. those feelings of regret are now a memory...
On May 16th 2007 prettybabe101 Said: 
prettybabe101 I like it. Its sad though :[
On May 16th 2007 onaipwolf Said: 
onaipwolf You wrote this very well, though it is tragic.
On May 16th 2007 drowningnlove Said: 
drowningnlove What this story is about is a teenage girl who has just been informed that her boyfriend doesnt love her. Unfortunately she contemplates suicide, because she herslef is pregnant and doesnt want the baby, since the father is a bastard. She kills the baby then herself. I know its graphic, I myself am against abortion, but this is just a story.