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Dark Death (Chapter 10)
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The I saw horror, pain, torment, and sadness in his eyes. Blood ran down the cross he lays on, and a hunger sparked in the deepth of his eyes. His feet where tied to the cross while his hands where nailed to it. His jenes where torn, dirty, and bloody, just like his shirt. His eyes a bright crimnson red, and he was pale as the moonlight.
His hair was a mess, just like the castle, even he was coverd in dirt. Small pools of blood was formed around the base of the cross and on the floor around it. Blood was dried on the edge of his mouth, and his body was scared. My body started to tremble at the sight of him.
'Any one strong enough to overtake a vampire, is more than I could ever handle.' I thought to myself, as a low groan exscapeted from the man before me.
"Little one..... you..you shouldn't... have come here...It's...It's to dangerous." He said, his voice harsh and scratchy. It looked like all he could do was move his head, and barely talk. Dark bags where under his eyes, and he looked as if he had been here for years.
"What happened? I never ment for anything bad to happen to you. You had saved my life all those years ago, and how did I repay you? I ran away to go after my brother for revenge." Tears started to burn behind my eyes, and I felt a lump in my throught. What has happened to me?
Comments
| On February 18th 2009 BeagleGurl9 Said: |
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| you need to write longer chapters!!!!!!!! but, i'm kinda confused with the story.
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