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Awww so cute

Romance Created on 9-24-07 Views(282) Story Rating G
I had just moved to the USA well The Bronx to be exact. I hated it here, it was way scary. Previously I lived in Australia (the best country in da world =P). I in Australia I had all my family, friends and the most important my boyfriend, well now he’s my ex. I missed him a lot, but I had to forget about him because by now I hope he’d forgotten about me so I didn’t get any more phone calls from him telling me to come back  an how much he missed me. He was so sweet but I couldn’t go back.

I was up stairs and I had just finished unpacking all my boxes nobody was home because they “sight seeing” and that was the last thing I wanted to do.  I sat in the middle of my room being surrounded by boxes. I started to think “ my dad knew I hated America but took the fukin job anyway” “gawd I hate him” Just as I was drifting of into a daydream I heard several loud noises, maybe about 10-11, they were really loud and sounded like they came from just outside my house. I started to freak out!

I slowly got up an headed to my bedroom door. I forgot about the boxes an tripped up and landed face down on the floor. I got up an rubbed my head then proceeded to go down stairs. I got to my front door and reached out to my door handle and opened the door.

I was mortified at what I seen. Two huge groups of African American guys either fighting each other or dancing with each other.... were just out side of my front door (not in my yard on the street).  I wasn’t stupid enough to go out there so I just turned around an when inside. I locked every lock on my door an sat agenised my door wishing I was back in Australia. After a few minutes I heard screeching of car tires then all the noise stopped.

I thought for a minute about opening the door and then I got up an I did. I walked outside an walked down my front path that leaded to the road. Then I saw him lying there covered in blood. He looked up an saw me standing there, he reached his arm and it fell to the ground. I felt like I was going to fall to the ground, but I didn’t I walked back inside, very calmly I called 911.

Then I calmly walked back outside and sat beside him. I was freaking out by now. I didn’t know what to do. I began to think “what happened to him” “how could this happen just outside my house”. Then he opened his eyes and held out his had to me. I grabbed his hand an held it.  I think he thought he was going to die....

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On October 5th 2007 omfg010203 Said: 
my picture
omgoodnes.....
On September 27th 2007 jennaferz Said: 
jennaferz um, SAD! and i love it. so please keep me posted! ;)
On September 26th 2007 Aegle Said: 
Aegle wow i like it, keep me posted pleaes
On September 26th 2007 october1015 Said: 
october1015 Lol yea! Just don't diss the bronx cause I live there okey? But good story!!!
On September 26th 2007 N2theATALIE Said: 
N2theATALIE Hey thats really good...keep me posted.
On September 24th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said: 
crankdatshit94 really gud...keep me posted please
On September 24th 2007 foxridergirl09 Said: 
foxridergirl09 i like it keep me posted
On September 24th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said: 
qosdfyjvwefayv lmao ya welcome ma-te =P *buuuurp* ohh my bad na diz story rox XD
On September 24th 2007 haylesrox Said: 
haylesrox lol
On September 24th 2007 haylesrox Said: 
haylesrox gee thanx mate
On September 24th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said: 
qosdfyjvwefayv awwww yay u posted it XD well i think this story iz da bomb like da best on here!! =p