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The Guy Next Door [2]

Romance Created on 10-7-07 Views(485) Story Rating G
I looked back up. I thought I was dreaming. I looked around my bedroom. I pinched my arm to see if I was dreaming. I screamed.“are you ok” my mum yelled up the stairs.“Yea im fine mum” she yelled before muttering “I think” 

I thought for a minute. I asked myself questions. Do I look down again? Or not? Will he still be down there? Or would he have gone home?I answered these questions without lookin. I figured that if he had come here for a reason to start with, then he would still be here. And in that case I should look back down.  

So I looked down slowly. I saw the roof of his house. Then I saw through his bedroom window. He wasn’t there. Then I looked down further. I saw trees and bushes. Then…….There he was. Standing between two trees. Looking up at my bedroom window.  

I was soooo happy that he had stayed. He saw the look on my face and smiled. It was the cutest smile I had ever seen. I smiled back at him. He saw, and laughed. I thought that I should laugh aswell, so I did. We looked at each other again and that’s when he said…….

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On November 9th 2007 dsouthernlily Said: 
my picture
I like. Keep me posted
On October 9th 2007 cashy31196 Said: 
cashy31196 some1 plz tell me when the next one is out!
On October 8th 2007 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ oh btw, keep me posted please :)
On October 8th 2007 CassieZ Said: 
CassieZ aww its cute :P but perhaps you could make them longer?
On October 8th 2007 crankdatshit94 Said: 
crankdatshit94 wat is gonna happen next?!?!?!?! i gotta kno!!!
On October 8th 2007 omfg010203 Said: 
my picture
cuteness!!!
On October 8th 2007 Aegle Said: 
Aegle gasp i want to KNOW>..ahhaa its so short grrr. Oh welll i want to know more
On October 8th 2007 october1015 Said: 
october1015 No cliffhangers!!!!!! But awesome story!!!
On October 7th 2007 dreamerdiz Said: 
dreamerdiz so. its really good but needs to be longer pp get impatient with cliff hangers. but other wise AWSOME!!!!!!
On October 7th 2007 jennaferz Said: 
jennaferz I NEED IT LONGER! lol
On October 7th 2007 xlollipopgurlx Said: 
xlollipopgurlx yeah yeah make it longer! its good! post me plzz
On October 7th 2007 N2theATALIE Said: 
N2theATALIE KEEP GOING!...keep me posted
On October 7th 2007 Nyyia Said: 
Nyyia i liked it but u need to make ur storys longer. but its good and what did he say. keep me posted plz.
On October 7th 2007 pure0wn23 Said: 
pure0wn23 if you keep me posted on this then ill vote for all of them, its a great story!!!!!!!!!!111
On October 7th 2007 guardgirl22 Said: 
guardgirl22 keep me posted!
On October 7th 2007 heathsgurl94 Said: 
heathsgurl94 moore!
On October 7th 2007 Carey2010 Said: 
Carey2010 said?!?!?!!?!? Ahh lol let me know when you post the next one!
On October 7th 2007 sherryiscool14 Said: 
sherryiscool14 Omg I LOVE it keep me posted please
On October 7th 2007 qosdfyjvwefayv Said: 
qosdfyjvwefayv gawd short much? lmao na haylz great job!!! luhv itwrite tha next part now!!! thats rite NOW!!!!
On October 7th 2007 deshanna13 Said: 
deshanna13 OMG WHAT DID HE SAY PLZZZZZZZZZ KEEP ME POSTED!!!
On October 7th 2007 thekoolkid13 Said: 
thekoolkid13 ahhh!! what did he say?! Finish it please!!! :]]]