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i woke up to my mother screaming that someone was at the door for me and amy.
" i wonder who it is " said amy.
" oh you know who it is"
it was jack and tony, jack was holding flowers and tony was holding the sheets to my bed. i snatched them from him. and me and amy gave jack a hug.
'' we was wondering did you two want to go to a amusment park up the road it come's around and only stays for a little bit and it would be perfect before amy leaves'' he said smiling and holding amy's hand.
" aww how very THOUGHTFUL jack'' i then told them that we would have to get dress and comeback in a hour or so.
" ahhhhhh mrs. amy robens " amy said plopping on my bed, she then looked at me and smiled " mrs. helen robens'' she said giggling i threw a pillow at her.
" it doesn't have a ring to it , and plus were over for good his charm cannot get me anymore and just to show that, i might turn gay"
amy then choked " w-what!?"
" just kidding" i said smiling, she then threw the pillow back at me.
" besides only reason i'am coming is because today is your last day, you and jack bet not be trying to get me and tony back together with no omg this rides only for two" i said putting my hands to my face.
" okay but that's not a promise"
" it better be a promise or i will go with the next snot nose kid behind me eating cotton candy" i said looking in my closet.
" your so mean" amy said throwing her head back down on the bed.
" no i'am so hurt" i paused for a minute as a shiver shook down my viens, and it's really begin to hit me again.
" helen, helen are you okay " amy said rising her head again.
" y-yea am fine" i said all choked up, then my sadness turned into fiery again.
which should i wear i told amy who now stood up and was looking through her suitcase.
" should i wear the cleavage train or the booty exuntuating number" i said holding them both.
" mmmh i like the cleavage train but your boobs might pop out on a roller coaster so go for the booty number" amy said holding up two items of her own.
" should i wear the red hot outfit or the cool blue one"
" i like the red hot make you into a sexy mami" i said hitting her on the butt.
" remind me you were just kidding about the gay thing right" she said looking at me suspicious, i pushed her then we both beginned to laugh.
it was 12:00pm when we were finally dressed we decided to go in jacks chervelot, him and amy was in the front and me and tony was in the back they were giggling as jack made gestures to her, tony then tried to hold my hand i moved it so quick he didn't know it wasn't there.
we arrived at the carnival it was teens and kids parents clowns everywhere.
" i wanna get on the hammer said amy holding jacks hand.
" okay you both wanna get on the hammer" jack said.
" i don't mind" i said tony just nodded.
it was a four seat ride so i didn't have to pair up but i was still by him as the ride slowly went up and came crashing down i held on to the side's as amy held on the jack and tony held on to his sides to.
we walked around for a little more until the guys decided to win us bears, they both won. jack got amy a little piggy and tony got me a gorilla.
" i don't want it" i said handing it back to him, he looked like he wanted to say something but didn't know how to say it.
amy then pulled me to the side " even though he broke your heart and am thinking not intentionally you don't have to be rude you were raised better than that" amy said letting go of my arm.
" but-" she then interuppted me.
" no but's please just act nice to him for my last day here"
" okay" i said defeated.
we then went on a rollercoaster that was two seated, even though there was a snot nose kid eating cotton candy behind me i decided to go with tony.
" don't be scared" he said as the coaster started to move.
" don't worry am not" i said smartly.
but as soon as the rollercoaster went down i grabbed for tony's hand which i quickly threw when i knew that he noticed.
after we got off the rollercoaster we went where we saw a big crowd.
it was a magician.
" can i have five couple's on the stage for my next magic trick he said, i thought to myself it figures.
jack then pulled amy's arm she was supraised because she didn't consider them a official couple yet and she pulled my arm which i tried to cut loose from but jack was pulling as he grabbed tony's arm.
we all stood up there it was a nerdy couple, a gothic couple, a blond and blue eyes girl with a blonde and blue eyes boy and us two.
now lady's and germs what i have here is a love-o-meter and the three couples with the highest love will only get to stay.
First he did the nerdy couple, his tie and hat flipped up as their love was off the meter.
" whoo they gave me whip flash" the crowd beginned to laugh.
and the same thing happened with the gothis couple.
next was the american dream couple their love was only 68% becaused it seemed they were more in love with themselves. it then came to me and tony our love was 89% i was supraised because it was so high and the things he done in the past kind of shows he didn't love me.
next was amy and jack.
" if they beat this young couples percentage...they will be the third couple. he said putting his hands on me and tony's shoulder.
he then did amy and jack their love percentage was 62% since it was new love it made sense. so amy and jack got off the stage but before they left jack flexed his muscles the lady's in the crowd went wild amy hit jack on the arm.
" now thats what i call steroids" said the phony magician.
so it was like a freak show on stage the nerdy couple, gothic couple, and biker couple.
we then played a game like the newlyweds. first question was how did we first meet, second was what was or first date, and third was are you going to marry this person.
for the first question the nerdy couple said they met in the school labatory.
the gothic couple they met behind a gas station.
and me and tony met in front of his house.
all of us got a point.
second question the nerdy couple said their first date was going down to the woods and finding rare forms of insects and animals.
the gothic couple said theres were going to see a ozzy concert.
our which was hard but we both choos the same one was taking a midnight dip in the lake, everyone said ohhhhhhhhh.
everyone got a point.
last question was are you gonna marry that person.
the nerdy couple said yes.
the gothic couple both said they would not retort themselves to fit the image of society...so i guess that was a no.
tony said yea
and i said no which made the people in the audience go crazy we were then elimidated.
" why did you pull that stunt you know i'am not gonna marry you" i then stormed off into the crowd and walked to the car it was now like 5 and the sun was setting then amy and jack ran up to me.
we were thinking about recreating you two first date he said staring at me and tony you wanna come" jack said.
" please helen please" amy said.
" alright " i said giving tony a nasty stare.
Comments
| On August 4th 2008 Natalyi Said : | |
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lovely |
| On July 31st 2008 xXPunkGirl09Xx Said : | |
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Cute :) |
| On July 31st 2008 Atlangel5 Said : | |
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I think this whole I hate you thing will blow over soon she is upset I mean they just fought like what the day before. I would act the same way too. |
| On July 30th 2008 rebelshawtieyo Said : | |
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Wow, she seemed so angry at Tony,, I wish her and Tony would make up... I was so depressed that they got eliminated ,, I bet Tony felt bad when Amy answered the marriage question with a no,, wow I LUV THIS STORY!! |
| On July 30th 2008 mysterywhateve Said : | |
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kmpp this keeps getting better and better |
| On July 30th 2008 albanianvukaj Said : | |
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once again, i agree with yeaitzjess |
| On July 30th 2008 UPTmrscarter93 Said : | |
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i luv it kmpp |
| On July 30th 2008 AliceAliveLove Said : | |
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i love this story and i agree with yeahitzjess you should write another tony p.o.v. kmp please - alice |
| On July 30th 2008 toni2006 Said : | |
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i loved it i agree with yeaitz we need a tony point of view one helen was being mean to tony i love this story keep writing your really good |
| On July 30th 2008 yeaitzJess Said : | |
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i think we need another tony one. she was being such a bitch and i think that tony was serious about the marring thing, because from the last time he obiouvsly has feelings and i bet if that was her in tonys body she would be crying so. yeah. well this is still one of my top favorite stories♥♥♥♥♥♥♥ |


