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the others:part one moving

i borrowed my title from ashmac with permission!
Creative Created on 9-24-09 Views(30) Story Rating PG

The gordons were in serious trouble. Thier house was slowly becoming a hell hole. One day the oldest son jesse flushed the toilet and all the water gushed out of a pipe over the fan! It exploded the light bulb and shocked his mom. The house was getting too small especially since a baby was on the way. No doubt it ws time to move. Jenny, the mom wanted a house in the woods or near a natural landscaping. Derek, the dad wanted to live in the burbs with the ditsy people. but appearantly mom is always right. in a few months they drove about 2 hours to get to velvet woods. while jenny was aslepp her seat became sticky and wet. it was going every where! derek pulled over and took a look. she was fully dialated and crowning. there were no hospitals  near by so they stayed the rest of they day trying to gt her to push." cant you  just pop that sucker out and go!" complained jesse. " no she cant!" yelled caitlyn. finally the baby came out. its a girl. caitlyn wrapped the baby in her jacket. they drove to the house and made pallets to sleep on. they went to the hospital the next morning. everyone xcept jesse he didnt feel like going. when he woke up he went outside. he loooked around and saw a flash of of pastel through the bushes.suspicious feeling he  walked around the woods to see what it was. he brushed around the orange leaves and found a latch. he was going to open it but his parents pulled up in the drive way.  he dashed to the back door and loked out the window.

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On September 25th 2009 korynn15 Said: 
korynn15 ha thanks! i love your series about jacob and sam! its freakin awesome!!! im gonna vote and subscribe!
On September 24th 2009 ashmac1996 Said: 
ashmac1996 Holy Crap Korynn! Now I'm glad I gave you that title! Great so far. I'm sure Jesse would have been proud to read it.