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Live it Through to the End. Ch 2 Part 2

Fiction Created on 7-24-07 Views(134) Story Rating G

Previously in the chapter. The beating and stuff had hit the papers the next morning.And something in the newspaper caught a group of friends eyes.What could they have seen on the note the owner had put by the newspaper stand?

          

They all came over, grabbed a nespaper after they read the sign and began to read:

Kingstown:Teenagers Kidnapped,Raped,and Beaten

Written by:Yuo Kim

 

 

Last night a group of three teenage girls were rushed to the Greenberry

General hospital after the were kidnapped earlier that day.Then later on the kidnappers had raped

and beaten the girls.Names were unavailable at the time.All three girls escaped with minor cuts and

bruises.Possibly one of them had a coule of broken bones. Continued on page A-5.

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On August 12th 2007 JWalker2406 Said: 
JWalker2406 It's good but I would like it to be more descriptive, like what were the kids reactions how did it make them feel. What was the smell of the store, etc. But it is still pretty good! :D
On July 26th 2007 xxcassiejayxx Said: 
xxcassiejayxx good, keep going
On July 25th 2007 pixiee11 Said: 
pixiee11 this is good i realy like it keep going i whant to read alot more you are a great writer i do belive that keep it up girl. love you like a sis haha
On July 24th 2007 Xpoetxgurlx Said: 
Xpoetxgurlx KEEP PUTTING MORE!!!!!!!!! OMG!!!!!!!! I SHALL DIE IF I DONT KNWO THE REST!!!!!!!!!!!
On July 24th 2007 nlis2kool Said: 
nlis2kool coule is supposed to be a couple