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Confessions of a Cutter....letter to cutting |
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The Unwanted part 2
Romance
 Created on 12-27-07
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She stood not 10 feet away from me. Her bright blonde hair shimmered in the moon light. Her long black dress danced around in the wind. Her bright green eyes could have swallowed me whole. She was like an angel, but the smell was horrible. I could hardly stand it. It was like something died and has decomposing right in front of my nose. She didn't seem to notice it.
She looked up at me and smiled. She took a step closer then stepped back with her nose crunched in disgust. Then the strangest thing happened.
She retreated hissing in my direction. I didn't get what she was doing until I saw that she was changing. Her whole body was vibrating. Her nose turned into a snout and I could see her eyes turning black. The next thing I knew she had turned into this big white wolf. Her eyes had turned from black to blue and she was backing up.
Something inside me was screaming at me to kill her, rip her to shreds, but the other side of me wanted her to change back to human form so I could kiss her.
I can't...I can't...I have to kill her.
I thought to myself.
I think I might love her...
I CAN'T LOVE HER! SHE'S A WEREWOLF. YOU ARE SUPPOSE TO KILL HER KIND.
FLASHBACK
"Demetri you are a vampire. You must stay hidden and you can not go out in the day time. You will feed at night and only on animals. You are forbidden to feed off humans." he said very seriously too me.
I looked around wondering where I am. The last thing I remember was being in the park. I had been there because my dad was drunk again and was beating on my mom.
A man came up to me and bite me on the neck.
Now I'm in a room full of pictures. Pictures of beautiful creatures. Some old, some young.
"You are to look for werewolves Demetri. You are to look for them and kill them. You are what us vampires call the Death Dealers.Werewolves are you to do the same to you. We are unwanted. Nobody wants us around. You are forbidden to mate, bond, talk, and/or make treaties with the werewolves. If you do you will be distroyed. Do you get what I'm saying Demetri?"
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Comments
Please Login to post comments| On January 3rd 2008 lequime Said : | |
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KMP! and PLEASE PLEASE make em longer? |
| On January 1st 2008 BlackHeartedMe Said : | |
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love it! Keep me posted please!!!!! |
| On January 1st 2008 cashy31196 Said : | |
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keep me posted plz! by the way its destroyed is spelled with a e not i |
| On December 30th 2007 krislynn08 Said : | |
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this is really good let me know when you get the next chapter up thanxs :) |
| On December 28th 2007 lovehungercree Said : | |
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wow, theses are pretty good keep me posted please |
| On December 28th 2007 JWalker2406 Said : | |
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Keep me posted, perhaps make it a tad bit longer?? Also maybe a few more details of the room or what the man looked like, perhaps the way he felt while he was in the park, etc. Just some things to spice it up and make it longer :D PLEASE continue :) It reminds me of a movie and would love to see where you take this! |
| On December 28th 2007 kinkybitch101 Said : | |
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i like it...keep me posted plz |
| On December 27th 2007 necrosiss Said : | |
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Hm. Continue. Keep me posted. |
| On December 27th 2007 KimSmallwood Said : | |
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whoa. cool. keep me posted =D |
| On December 27th 2007 ALICHELLA16 Said : | |
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i like it! please keep me posted, it reminds me of new moon by stephenie meyers |
