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Don't take the Girl

Romance Created on 1-12-08 Views(278) Story Rating G

Tyler Michaels was so excited for the first day of 2nd grade. He couldn't wait to see his friends but most of all he couldn't wait to tell them about his fishing trip his dad is going to take him on.

As he walked onto the playground he looked over at the basketball hoops and saw them, his best friends. Beau, Tim, and David.

He ran over and they all slapped hands.

"Guys you will never guess what my dad and I are doing on Saturday." Tyler said enthusiastically.

"What?"asked David.

"Is he taking you to Cabel's?" asked Beau.

"Nope, better." Tyler was almost going to explode with exsitement.

"What? What is it?" said Tim.

"My dad is gonna take me fishing!" Tyler practically yelled.

"Oh no way." they all said at the same time.

"Do you think your dad could take me?" asked Beau.

"No, he said it was just gonna be the 2 of us."

"Oh ok."

Meanwhile

Ashley Kellers was wearing her brand new pink dress with a matching bow in her hair. She hated the thing. Even though her mom told her not to, she was going to get it all dirty at recess.

"Shows her not to dress me in this hideous thing." Ashley thought to her self...

As Ashley was putting her backpack in her cubbie her best friend since Kindergarten, Bella Cringle, walked up to her and poked her side.

"Hey Ashley, lets go outside and chase the boys!"

"Um ok, just let me put my things away first."

"Ok meet me out there!"

Bella ran out the door and Ashley was about to join her when she saw Tyler, David, Beau, and Tim walk in the door. She overheard them talking about a fishing trip that Tyler was going on on Saturday.

"Oh I LOVE fishing" though Ashley. "I wonder if I showed up they would let me go too?"

Saturday Morning

"Tyler are you ready?" Yelled Kyle, Tyler's dad.

"Yeah"

Tyler pounded down the stairs wearing his camo shorts, a bright red t-shirt, his favorite Saint Louis Cardnals hat, and a pair of untied shoes. His hair was sticking out everywhere and his pants hadn't been washed in a couple days.

As they walked out the door Tyler was telling his dad how big the fish he was going to catch was going to be.

"It is going to be hu-"

Just then the old white gate that surrounded his whole house creaked. He looked over and saw Ashley walk in holding a fishing pole.

Oh no.

"Well hello Ashley. What are you doing here today?" asked Kyle.

"Um I was wondering if I could go fishing with you guys today." she shrugged shyly.

She was wearing a pair of capris and a yellow tank top. She had her hair up in a ponytail and she was carrying a long black fishing pole.

"We would love to have you joining us today Ashley." said Kyle

That definatly wasn't the answer Tyler was expecting.

"WHAT? What do you mean she can go? Oh come on dad! You said that Beau couldn't go but your letting this girl go! That is so unfair!" yelled Tyler. "I can't believe this!"

 

10 years later!

"Where is he?" Ashley thought to herself.

She was leaning up against her blue Malibu at the Port Angalus Airport. She was wearing a pair of cut off jeans, bright pink tank top, and white flip flops. It was the end of summer after graduation and Tyler was just getting home. He had been in Mexico for the last 3 weeks and it was killing Ashley to wait for him.

"ASHLEY!"

"ASHLEY! I'M OVER HERE!"

She saw him. His very fun bleached brown hair, his bright green eyes, his big muscles that he earned from playing 4 years of football,and his very old and crappy St. Louis Cardnals hat.

She ran up to him and jumped into his waiting arms. She kissed him like there was no tomorrow. He was just as eager. He pulled away and looked into her deep blue seagreen eyes and smiled.

"I missed you." he said smiling then kissing her again.

Even though she should be used to his smile, it still knocked the breath out of her. So while she wanted to keep kissing him she pulled back to get a break. Giving him a back breaking hug she said, "Don't ever leave me again!!"

{{Hey guys! What do you think? Do you think I should continue or not?!?! Please tell me! Can't wait to see your answers! I hope you enjoyed! 10 Rates for the next one! Thanks!}}

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On August 9th 2008 10sYd10 Said :
10sYd10 awwwwwwww i love that song!!!!!! thats wher u got da idea right?
On January 18th 2008 piratesrule78 Said :
piratesrule78 awwwwwww its awsome i luv it kmp
On January 13th 2008 lovehungercree Said :
lovehungercree I love it!!! You got ur idea from Tim McGraw's song, didn't you? Why did I think of that! GOOD JOB!!! KEEP ME POSTED!!!
On January 13th 2008 KimSmallwood Said :
KimSmallwood awwww its soooo cute. i love it. keep me posted =]
On January 13th 2008 Darkrose3 Said :
Darkrose3 I love it! It is awesome! kmp!
On January 13th 2008 kinkybitch101 Said :
kinkybitch101 i so love it...kmp
On January 12th 2008 pinkpunkdiva Said :
pinkpunkdiva keep me posted please.... its cool so far
On January 12th 2008 tece26 Said :
tece26 I love this songs, one of my favorites! But I would agree with tigerbaby, dont follow the song completely. Give it a twist and make it totally yours. Great job, keep me posted
On January 12th 2008 krislynn08 Said :
krislynn08 this is really good you should keep it going. plz keep me posted. I also have up a story called A Life of Misery. I would really like to know what you think of it. I know its hard to read because i forgot quotations.thanks
On January 12th 2008 TaylorAlexis12 Said :
TaylorAlexis12 KMP! Best song ever...storie's even better!
On January 12th 2008 username685 Said :
username685 i like it kmp if you continue
On January 12th 2008 jennaferz Said :
jennaferz i likee it. :]
On January 12th 2008 abbyz11w Said :
abbyz11w REALLLLLLY GREAT!!!KMP PLZ!!!
On January 12th 2008 J3w3llC82890 Said :
J3w3llC82890 wow. mazing first post! i really like it! keep me posted pleasE!! *J*
On January 12th 2008 fierygal2010 Said :
fierygal2010 lol I love this song!! my friends and i use to sing it on the bus all the time! yea keep it going!! and Keep Me Posted!!!
On January 12th 2008 tigerbaby7644 Said :
tigerbaby7644 this is really great let me guess got the idea form the song..heres a hint dont follow the song complatay people might think ur trying to steal it or sumthing idk but i do no this is a great story plaese kmp
On January 12th 2008 jean125678 Said :
jean125678 i love it kmp
On January 12th 2008 pinkslip300 Said :
pinkslip300 ~HOLY CRAP!!! THAT is the most fuckin AWSOMENEST STORY EVER! hell yea, u should continue!! haha that was 2 funny and i really enjoyed it sis. hehe. plz make a second 1. *givez u puppy eyes* lol love yaz! *hugz* J3ss!~ ♥ really koool gurl
On January 12th 2008 kg108551 Said :
kg108551 YaY! Reminds me of the song by Tim McGraw! Love that song! *thumbs up* kmp
On January 12th 2008 CassieMIsMe Said :
CassieMIsMe this is really good! I love it! pleased keep me psoted!
On January 12th 2008 LizWinker93 Said :
LizWinker93 i looove it. please kmp!
On January 12th 2008 avder Said :
avder continue please i love it
On January 12th 2008 DaKay Said :
DaKay Tim McGraw song.. Gotta love that freaking song!!!!!!! KMP!
On January 12th 2008 LonelyReality9 Said :
LonelyReality9 i like it =]] plz keep me posted. and let me know if u have any ideas for my story simply meant to be. thx
On January 12th 2008 foxridergirl09 Said :
foxridergirl09 omg it is just like the song keep me posted plz