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Mermaid: Epilogue

Creative Created on 6-7-08 Views(823) Story Rating G

All my life it’s been:

“Don’t go near the water Lev!”

“Stay away from the ocean Lev!”

“No Levy! We’re not going to the beach!”

Ever since I could remember I have been forbidden to even come within 10 feet of water. As a child I was okay with this, having heard many stories of the terrors that roamed the depths of those liquid bodies. Many a night, my father would tell me tales of sharks able to swallow me whole and electric eels able to kill me with a single sting. And so, to avoid a horrible death by one of these creatures, I dutifully kept away from any mass of water that wasn’t the blow up or public pool.

But as the years went on and girls started becoming desires instead of terrors, so did the sea. Along with the longing for kisses and soft caresses came a longing to feel the cool clear waters rush over my feet, the sand seeping through my toes. I wanted to feel the rise and fall of the current beneath me, the tickling of seaweed beneath my feet with a gentle roar of the ocean waves filing my ears. I yearned to experience the calming and refreshing sensation of being surrounded by water that smelt like salt rather than chlorine... 


I desired to discover the mysteries of the sea.

 

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On August 28th 2009 EmeraldYakumo Said: 
EmeraldYakumo Interesting beginning so far.
On July 26th 2008 krislynn08 Said: 
krislynn08 really good
On July 3rd 2008 xoxrinbabesxox Said: 
xoxrinbabesxox please keep me posted this sounds really good. the description of her at the sea is AMAZING
On June 30th 2008 lazyvampire Said: 
lazyvampire oo. keep me posted please. sounds like this could be a really gurd story
On June 26th 2008 hckeygrl Said: 
hckeygrl KMP!! this is really good
On June 18th 2008 Shrimpie0008 Said: 
Shrimpie0008 kmp.please. this is pretty much awesome. XD bsest story ever. makes me wonder.(: its beautiful. add mee as a friend please.
On June 15th 2008 gotmilk1994 Said: 
gotmilk1994 WOW! cooooooooool :)
On June 11th 2008 thuhchris Said: 
thuhchris kmp.. sounds good so far
On June 10th 2008 Artemisseven Said: 
Artemisseven sounds interesting. plz keep me posted.
On June 9th 2008 melissabik Said: 
melissabik ooh! you've got me reeled in. :) i can't wait to read more. is this a guy talking? i think so...
On June 9th 2008 PopChile Said: 
PopChile i like it so far kmp!
On June 9th 2008 vampirefreak61 Said: 
vampirefreak61 sounds interesting kmp
On June 9th 2008 cheerwine14352 Said: 
cheerwine14352 wow this sounds good so far kmp please!
On June 9th 2008 Sammybabe92 Said: 
Sammybabe92 soudns pretty cool kmp
On June 8th 2008 DefineEmo Said: 
DefineEmo Wow. This is good. Kmp please.
On June 8th 2008 ridinbitch0807 Said: 
ridinbitch0807 wow. luv it! u r really good. i luv all ur stories! KMP!!!
On June 8th 2008 KimSmallwood Said: 
KimSmallwood swweeeet. kmp plz [is the person talking a boy? sounds like it]
On June 8th 2008 shitzmay Said: 
shitzmay kmpp, i loved it, its somthing new.
On June 8th 2008 CSLimeWriter Said: 
CSLimeWriter wow how do you always get millions of votes? and this is only the epilogue!! lol kmp
On June 7th 2008 Atlangel5 Said: 
Atlangel5 oh I like definatly KMP!!!
On June 7th 2008 Slackee Said: 
Slackee kmp!
On June 7th 2008 ShiningKanin Said: 
ShiningKanin sounds interesting! keep me posted please!
On June 7th 2008 analyssarenae Said: 
analyssarenae wow. that sounds really cool! kmpp
On June 7th 2008 XxCloudyEyesxX Said: 
XxCloudyEyesxX great beginning, plz kmp!!
On June 7th 2008 yeaitzJess Said: 
yeaitzJess please keep me posted and for THIRST if your doing anymore of those