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Vampires

Creative Created on 6-27-09 Views(93) Story Rating PG

Hello i am Jasmine. I am the daughter of Lord Ralmaros and grand daughter of Lord Galamore. This is a story about my father. And i am the first Vampire elder.

(January 1st 1850 12:00 am)

Gaurd "Lord Galamore the lycans there coming"  Galamore "any word from our scouts"  Gaurd  "no sir the lycans are but 3 miles away"  Galamore "*yells* we must defend. the lycans are comming"  childs voice  "father whats going on"  Galamore "come here. you see those wolf creatures"  child "yea"  Galamore "there comming to kill us"  child "dont let them kill me father"  Galamore "i promise you i wont"  scout "my lord there thousands"  Galamore "ok *yells* time to use our silver arrow catapult"  captin "we been breached from the rear"  Galamore "get your best troops up here and defend mt son"  captin "yes sir"  child "but father i want to fight to"  Galamore "i cant let you die my son *takes off his necklace and hands it to the child* takes this it will give you luck"

(10 years later)

general "Lord Ralmaros the counsil will like to see you"  Ralmaros "ok *walks into the counsil room* good evning counsil"  head counsil member "i heard your father gave you his amulet befor he died 5 years ago"  Ralmaros "you heard right its right here *pulls it out*"  head counsil "you know what that amulet does"  womens voice  "great power to control this clan"  head counsil "correct Ralmaros this is Valery she ill be your lady"  Ralmaros "im only 16"  Valery "im only 15 so why cant i be your lady"  Ralmaros "what happens if i deny this request"  counsil member #1 "then my son Kalmanoras will be the new elder"  Ralmaros "i will accept Valery to be my lady"  entire counsil "meeting over"

(6 monthes after Ralmaros and Valery got married they had a child)

(5 year later)

general "Lord Ralmaros"  Ralmaros "yes general"  general "Lady Valery shes been killed by the lycans on her journy back"  childs voice "mommys dead?"  Ralmaros "yes little one mommys dead.....general get every one ready if its a war they want its a war they get"  general "yes sir"  child "i want mommy"  Ralmaros "come her little one you can come with me and together we will revenge your mother"  child "okay daddy"  general "my lord the clan is ready to fight on your command"  Galamore "send a messenger"  general "sir"

(1 1/2 years later)

messenger "they are comming at midnight"  Ralmaros "that good general tell all of the vampires to prpare for battle"  general "yes sir"  child "father can i join you"  Ralmaros "yes you can captin get my daughter into armor"  captin "sir"  child "thank you father"  Ralmaros "oh and captin give her light but strong armor with two short swords"  captin "yes sir"  Ralmaros "general whats are tatu right now"  general "its 2000 lycans agains 2300 vampires"  Ralmaros " actualy make it 2301 cause my daughter is going to join me"  general "thats the law of the elders"  Ralmaros "whos the elder right now"  general "you sir i am sorry"  Ralmaros "its alright im doing this cause my father didnt let me into war"

(same day 12:00am)

Ralmaros "prepare for battle"  general "are we attacking first or no"  Ralmaros  "balits fire on my comand"  general "then wer attacking first"  child "father may i tell them when to fire"  Ralmaros "yes you may"  child "ready...aim...fire"  general "do we charge now" (the child looks at Ralmaros then at the general)  child "CHARGE"  general "you heard him charge"  Ralmaros "stay beside me"  child "ok"

(sunrise)

general "back to the castle"  Lycan elder "lets go befor were in our human forms again"  child "weres father"  general "he didnt make it" child "no he cant be his an elder he cant be dead"  general "he is but i got this *hands the amulet to the child* his amulet"  child "he is dead which means i will be known as Lady Jasmine"

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On August 26th 2009 Alma13Jack Said: 
Alma13Jack Awesome!
On June 28th 2009 mannie512927 Said: 
mannie512927 awww thats sad, but love it!! keep it up!!
On June 27th 2009 cbass35 Said: 
cbass35 this was pretty good...keep it going. go and check out my story called The Love of Spiderman and the Hulk. leave a comment and rate it if you like it. but this was pretty good.