Email:
Password:

P.S. I Love You [15]

i hope you like it
Creative Created on 5-8-09 Views(209) Story Rating G

It was time I had to do something about Dustin leaving and me acting so rude. I went up to Natasha to yell at her but before I started she said, “Thanks”

“What did I do?” I asked ready to get a dagger and kill her.

“Because you were so rude to Dustin I broke up with Jack and asked out Dustin.”

“But Dustin is gone.”

“Yeah I know his new cell number.”

“Why would he want to go out with you?”

“Because I said goodbye in a nice way.”

“Anyways Dustin and I haven’t broke up yet.”

“Oh well he took that as a break up.”

“Can I have his number?”

“Nope” She walked away and I was ready to pounce on her, but I controlled myself. I just turned the other cheek and walked away. Now I will never be able to apologize to Dustin. The worst part is that Natasha is going out with Dustin. I thought that maybe Jenna has his number so when I saw her walk in I ran towards her and said, “Please tell me that you have Dustin’s number.”

“I do but it’s his old number.” Jenna said itching her nose.

“Ugh, Natasha is going out with Dustin.” Jenna completely froze up once I said that

“WHAT?! OMG this is 8th grade all over again.”

“It’s ridiculous I don’t know if I can forgive him ever again.”

“Why?”

“I don’t want my heart to get broken again.”

            I started to cry and Jenna was comforting me. Then Chad and Jack both came over to comfort me. All the sudden Kristina, Madison, and Jared came to comfort me. Jenna asked, “Why are you all over here?”

“Natasha told us what she did and it was really rude.” Kristina said

“Yeah and we can’t hang out with someone who hurts a friend.” Madison said

“I am your guys’ friends?” Jenna asked

“Well we were talking about Serenity but we can include you.” Madison said

            It made me laugh, but tears were still falling down my face so I knew he was the right guy for me. But I just couldn’t forgive him this time he can beg, but it wouldn’t happen.

I went home and my mom comforted me all day. “Sweetie it will all be okay.” She said hugging me tight.

“When will it all be okay?” I said trying to breathe

“Maybe when you get older.” She let go of me.

“I can’t wait that long.” I took a cookie off the plate and dipped it in chocolate ice cream.

 I went to bed and I had a dream where Dustin and I were on the Ferris wheel and we kissed. Then our seat flew up into the sky and we were still kissing. It was a great dream till the devil showed up in the sky and pushed us down. It was Natasha as the devil and she grabbed Dustin and I fell into a cage. Then I woke up screaming.

            I didn’t show up for school the next day. I wasn’t sick I was just crying all day. I couldn’t do anything about this I was so upset and ready to pass out. Then I got a call on my cellphone.

i decide to write more since you all like this story.

Comments

Please Login to post comments
On June 11th 2009 PROBETRO Said: 
PROBETRO funny dream i can imagine my friend shell tell me something like that
On May 9th 2009 kalenna4 Said: 
kalenna4 I hope its Dustin
On May 8th 2009 xXmadamemoonXx Said: 
xXmadamemoonXx ooo....
On May 8th 2009 lilmizzstace Said: 
lilmizzstace i like it i wonder who is calling her. i hope its dustin :)
On May 8th 2009 urjealousofme Said: 
urjealousofme yeah i know thanks for telling me but this is my story
On May 8th 2009 erickagere Said: 
erickagere Good. It's not very fair of you to do that. How is someone going to take you seriously as a writer if you steal another author's works? Just saying.
On May 8th 2009 urjealousofme Said: 
urjealousofme i deleted them all
On May 8th 2009 erickagere Said: 
erickagere Look at all of your poems. You are trying to take credit for writings other people have created. If you want, I could go through and leave them all a message telling them how you stole them. I'm pretty sure you could get into deep trouble because they are copyrighted.
On May 8th 2009 urjealousofme Said: 
urjealousofme you can prove it wrong but i don't know how you would
On May 8th 2009 urjealousofme Said: 
urjealousofme yes why wouldn't it be original?
On May 8th 2009 erickagere Said: 
erickagere Are you sure this is original? I mean, after seeing those poems that you stole and took credit for.