i like it, ur really good. i've been writing more but i haven't really gotten on here, you should add my myspace.=] i get on there regularly. so i might add more. =] it was really good kmp if it's no trouble.=]
that was really good, some stories just dont attract me the way this one lured me in. nice choice of words. i wouldn't ask you to look at mine, only because i dont know how far im going with it. good job!
Hmm. It’s intriguing. Please keep me posted.
Also, if you could and if you want to, please check out my story Those Black Eyes and let me know what you think. I love constructive criticism.
*J*
Also, if you could and if you want to, please check out my story Those Black Eyes and let me know what you think. I love constructive criticism.
*J*