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On November 16th 2009 speederspider Said :
	I have the same problem, but I promise if I'm online I will respond to your posts in the best possible way.

On November 14th 2009 speederspider Said :
	puma I want you to come back. This site is really starting to suck. Almost enough for me to retire.

On September 29th 2009 speederspider Said :
	Hi puma!

On September 29th 2009 RalRasper Said :
	yes sirrrrrrr

On September 25th 2009 pkb2009 Said :
	GENIUS! :) Thanks.

On September 25th 2009 pkb2009 Said :
	In response to ur critique, I thank you for the feedback, and I quite agree, it is rather filled with cliches, i didn't know how to really avoid it. It hasn't had much polish time either, so i'm glad that you didn't find it too offensive, lol. As for the commas thing, I think i unconsciously put them when I pause in a thought, i think how i speak, its rather different. as for the bit about bringing the reader in, i didn't know how to deal with that sentence. i tried a few ways of wording it, and while that didn't fit, none of the rest of them fit very well either. we, encompasses humanity, which i'm assuming the reader is, and i'd hope maybe help the reader associate better with the plight, realizing that its his/her species in danger, not just the species of the character in the book. if you have any suggestions on that bit, i'd love to hear them, as it bugged me slightly as well. thank you much, Preston

On September 19th 2009 pkb2009 Said :
	When Man Has Fallen... Please read and critique? Sorry for the spam, but its my first new story in a while. Downvote this it if it displeases you..

On September 19th 2009 speederspider Said :
	I figured it was something like that...

On September 16th 2009 speederspider Said :
	you look exactly like the guy that works at my bank...haha!

On August 21st 2009 tmicha07 Said :
	haha lol well i've read some of your past posts and a couple of your comments on mine and omg you actually speak the truth haha

On August 21st 2009 tmicha07 Said :
	wow you r seriously one of the smartest and most reasonable ppl on this site, i hope you know.

On July 31st 2009 AlexINTJ Said :
	Smartass? Come on now, chap! That was being quite literal. There wasn't any smart-assing involved. Not much, anyway. As for not knowing what I'm missing, I don't know a great deal, so this shouldn't be surprising since it fits adequately with the pattern.

On July 31st 2009 AlexINTJ Said :
	*looks down through list of comments* I don't see a Numbbbb0z anywhere, so I have no idea what you're talking about. As for being worthy of your company, you're going to have to get me a medal or something for this. I could put it in a résumé. For your information, those are fabulous glasses.

On July 27th 2009 RalRasper Said :
	still like it

On July 20th 2009 speederspider Said :
	Puma check out the new pic owwwwwe!